BTS: The Script
Here are some truths and lessons learned during the writing process of Gripped:
#1 Think with people, write alone.
To a writer familiar with a writer’s room, this might seem obvious. However, I believe the narrative of a writer alone in their room, banging their head against a wall in hopes of unlocking a Tarantino-esque story line with melodic Sorkin-like dialogue, is heavily romanticized. There is something freeing about working through loglines, ideas, and plots with like-minded artists. Confidence is gained, characters start to emerge in your mind, then you can go to your space and let your thoughts run - mind to script. This also allows for accountability at the beginning of the process, assuming these meet-ups are regular - your friends are expecting you to give them at least one scene after your hours of collaboration.
#2 What is the point of each scene and character?
This question will both liberate and haunt; it needs to be on replay, especially throughout the revision process. What is the story that you need to tell? What is each scene about? What needs to be on the page? Keep your vision but always be prepared to “kill your darlings”.
#3 Name your characters
Yes, all of them. Properly. This approach forces you to contend with their personas, adding more depth. Additionally, your actors will appreciate it; no actor wants to be cast as 'Store Clerk' or 'Cop #1.’
#4 Get feedback from people you trust
Thoughtful feedback is a gift. Never consider it to be anything less. Family, friends, colleagues, and even collaborators aren't always honest. Finding someone who can critique your work rigorously or simply say, "Brilliant work! I have some questions but no notes," can be challenging. Honestly, finding just one or two people who connect with your work and communicate in a way that resonates with you is all you need. Feedback is incredibly insightful and should be considered, even if it doesn't always need to be applied.
#5 Trust the audience + reward them
Whenever someone decides to watch a movie, they are giving you their attention. It's yours to lose; no audience wants to feel like they are being spoon-fed exposition or have critical information spelled out for them. More often than not, people want to feel intelligent and uncover the narrative themselves. It's a gift if you can make this experience rewarding for them — whether through engaging dialogue, skillful direction in a scene, action, or any other means. Trust your audience and give them a reason to be grateful for paying attention. This is one lesson I’ll certainly lean into for the next project.